Fa tale flew in our classroom

WALT:describing a place

s.c i will need to use adjective and verbs


   Ice cream and solid meat. Frosty wind flying right to my face. I'm shivering like frosted ice cream. I'm bumping into shelves  with lots of food on it. The frozen water going up my nose.It's raining and pouring outside. The windows are covered in raindrops. My feet are getting numb . People are leaving and it silent like nobodies here. Money banks going ch ching and my money go in the money bank.

Fair trade smothie

the drum show

BOOM!! BANG!!! the drums were so loud oow yaka youma theai , The guy was brave and had  strong voice it was so cold. I was astonished the drums where so LOUD.


we were banging it all together and it was repeating it over and over again.


 My mouth was gasping puffing, my sweat was dripping down my face air blowing right over me. The drums were vibrating and sliding around.


Then the lady came and her voice was so quite not strong not powerful it was so quite and then it was the end...



                                                            BY GRACE

Fair trade question

WALT: create a show don't tell story

I was splashed by mud just like melted chocolate.My feet were burning like hot water trying to hit my feet.Stinging eyes just like a bee has stung me.Wind whipped my face like a bird flew past me and Im 

about to face plant right were the sharp twigs are my legs are painful like I'm carrying a weight my feet are tired by stepping on the cold mud.I was chased by people just like monkeys running after me.  

                                              the end

by grace 

                                                                                                                                                                                        

ASK-a character of your choice for 6 key words which would tell you more about them

SHOW- your character saying something from the story

The Cat in the Hat comes back, by Dr Seuss

My Family Tree

The Clever Gribbles, by Joy Cowley - as read by Grace.

Handwriting

Handwriting skills

Walt use tense correctly

Walt telling the time

Walt Identifiey what an author has done to describe a place